Excellence
Well written, I must say. Definitely evokes the intended emotional response
One thing: I like how the string has a long attack, but on the shorter notes, it becomes somewhat "awkward sounding" (I don't know how to word it). Simply put, short notes don't have enough time to reach peak note volume, which can be solved by having a shorter attack on short notes, or having them portamento to the next note, or using my favorite technique, having them start before the last note ends.
I think I heard some chord dissonance, but I am not sure, nor I am that educated in music theory to say it is undesirable. I think love songs should have a smooth chord progression.
Possibly could add more instruments/expand into a more emotional song. The piano and strings fit perfectly, but I feel something like a high violin/viola would do this song much if you choose to add it.
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