Nice Try,
I liked this movie's style, mainly the art, not so much the comedy.
Work on:
Audio Sync-esspecially when 'Corn' was cutting over the customer.
Comedy-It was good, but, not that funny, sorry
Keep...
TRYING!-I want to see more from you, keep at it "Practice makes very good"
Summing Up:
I see you put work into this, but the comedy wasn't the greatest. At the begining, I thought that the humor would be cliche' and repetitive, but the carrot made this flash standard.
GO AUSTRALIA!