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Reviews for "[GZ] Dream Trance"

Lookey here ^_~.

Congrats on top five! Looks like i'm reviewing YOUR top five now. Congrats on getting it haha well deserved. I wouldn't say this is the best i've heard but i will say its pretty damn good. The percussion is rather well done for this type of song. Well done with the synths. Gives a bit of emotion and makes ya wanna get up and run around hah. Keep it up bro!

Wyldfyre1

GrayZ responds:

:o thanks so much! :) I'm still new to fl and Imo I don't deserve top 5 compared to some of the amazing work on here. but I'm glad you liked my song! :D

Main point of contention: Originality

But then again, the arp IS a tad too useful for its own good anyway, and the product you've come up with is excellent for a beginner. In any case, it's not like you completely ripped people off and your end product has concepts that are equally original, so I'm going to give you an 8 - sorry if that's a bit harsh, it really is what I think. There's another example of a similar arp and melody being used: see if you can find AF + T888: Astral Dream anywhere. Hopefully you can draw more inspiration from all around you to improve your composing!

P.S. Turn up the kick. ;)

GrayZ responds:

Haha thanks alot! It's not harsh at all :) My friend kept begging me to turn up the kick but I didn't see it convenient boy was I wrong :P Thanks so much for the review :)

melodic

a nice melodic track. the first 30 seconds seems to have a nice build up but you could try adding bass in the track to give it more of a drop. also im from newcastle in england keep producing!

GrayZ responds:

thanks alot! :) And wow haha I'm from newcastle to! :)

Its cool

I don't useually like tecno so be proud of this reveiw because you are one of very few people that can acually make good tecno music, I would try to make some song that arn't tecno cause if you can make a really good song thats not tecno it's ten times more likely to get in the top songs of the week. Good Job

GrayZ responds:

Thanks alot

Pretty good.

Makes a good loop, but could be improved.
Like maybe some bass or something.

GrayZ responds:

yeahh I can never make bass very good in songs, it alwqays sounds wack, thanks alot man.