Great
For the first flash it's good. Too short I think, you need to improve your sound also, keep up the good work.
Reviews for "Akuma"
A pity
Would have made very good animation if you finished it, oh well hope you make more.
Definitely a good effort!
First of all, your art-style was a pleasure to the eye. The only suggestion there is using some nice effects, for example when you panned the SWAT member over the police car, you could've blurred the police car to make it look more background-ish. The animation was good, but a higher framerate per second is suggested, especially for the scene with the hooded man reflecting the bullets, a higher frame rate could really benefit the animation. Also sync your audio when a dialogue takes place, makes it seem so much more realistic. The only major complaint I can think of is that the dialogue was sometimes hard to hear, especially in the beginning. This is a problem that's easily solved; there's a programme called Audacity which allows you to set the decibels for .wav files before you import them. Fool around with that a bit, I'm sure it'll increase your sound quality. This seems like it will turn out as a series, and it looks good, good introduction, some action, some dialogue, you're really starting to build a plot and that's definitely a plus. For your first attempt, this is brilliant and I'm looking forward to seeing more. 3/5
not bad for the 1st try
The sound job needs to be fixed a bit, the voice overs can barely be heard, the animation for a 1st time job was pretty good but overall much work can still be done. There wasn't any truly animated fighting, to test how good you are with character fluidity and flow. As far as the story goes. Supernatural angel vs demon thing is probably the most overplayed thing in animation thanks to anime, which by going by your character design influenced your drawing. So as far as story line creativity, I can't give you props on an old idea. Then again it is your 1st flash. There is a potential with your work though so its not all that bad. Of course from reading other people's post you criticized the heck out of another artist's work. Of course if you take into the length of the media, and the increased amount of detail and setting work put into the flick in addition to decent voice quality, decent character flow movement, and the fact that the physcial combat scenes actually move together as one. This blows your attempts out of the water. Oh and their story line is much more creative then the way depicted thus far in your film. Due to the complexities of the plot and the themes the flash movie represnets. your film is good enough not to be banned though. It will be interesting to see how your next effort will be.
What?
Well, I liked the animation and all, but have you checked your microphone recently? I could barely hear a thing.