ok
Well this one started off different wich was nice and refreshing, you actually have a tad more story in this one but again could be longer, I like the naration on this, very funny stuff.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well for this one since you added extra stuff maybe this one just needs some subtitles.
~X~
Double Review
First episode was clever, though the music was maybe a bit too loud, compared to the voice acting. Joke was fine, nothing too special.
Second episode was funny, loved the irony, but also in this one, music was a bit loud compared to voice acting.
AWSOME!
OMG THE CUBS ARE GOING TO THE SUPER BOWL!
GAAAH!
It gets moar awesome everytime I watch it!!! I must know the opening credits song!!!
NOW!
yours respectfully,
NirvanaPepper
thhhe eff?
could use less random and more funny