hmmmm
well, i won't totally slam ya on this, coz i see some potential here. but stuff like this you really shouldn't submit to NG, coz all folks here will do is tell you that you suck and shouldn't submit things like this. basically this is something you should put on your home page. it would be cool there or maybe as an avatar on a bbs, that would be cool. but as a NG submisssion? try harder, you have the potential.