good...
For the first SERIOUS submission, this is great. Though it was somewhat short and a bit slow, it is still good.
My suggestion is to be more detail. Some lines were too thick, for example.
Another thing is, that it felt a bit too EMO. Though it was probably what you were going for, it still isn't the best concept.
Still, protection from me and you keep it up.
Aww...
Now, If I were a Girl I would have probably rated this a little bit higher!
Sorry, but as a BOY, Violence and Action are my thing LOL!
Stereo-typing is BAD I know! Sorry
3/5 A Good Movie!
gwmmmmm :/
Um...... it's really hard to write a review on that one not being ignorant :D. Okay.... graphics were okay, but you should really try drawing with lines. Effect would be much better.
Next thing... you should REALLY put some more action into that movie, because unless that death was real, the movie have no real meaning... it's not rly moving, because we don't know the story behind movie.
But you chose a very good music for that movie. It matched the situation and created atmosphere of sadness.
No more comment :D. You have a talent, but try to use it a bit more :D.
Sorry But........
I Can't say i liked it but maybe its not my style, i think NG has rom for better Anims, maybe you should try the violent approach to animation.