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Reviews for "Line Moto Cross"

Fun

I made such a long track. Took me a while, but it was real fun. Good first submission, fun game... Only one problem...

IT MAKES ME WANNA RIDE AND I SOLD MY BIKE A WHILE AGO!!!

Jesuson responds:

Thank you for the review. I promise it will be better on next days, lot of work yet, but could't wait for submit... :D

Shitty version of a good game

Graphics- Black and white and undetailed
Style-Copied
Sound-I had no speakers so i cant talk here
Violence-Not that i noticed
Humor- It was so bad i laughed

Ultimately you didnt need to make another version of the game. Especially as its downgraded.

Jesuson responds:

I would thank you if you don't use terms like shitty for describe submisions,even for the worst game here developers spend lot of hours programming for you entertaiment.
I think is a madness to compare this two games becouse while "line rider" is developed by a videogames company I did this one by my self with next to a month learning action script.

good work

little uprades and that`it. Pretty good work

Jesuson responds:

Still working on it. Some bugs are fixed now.
Thanks!!

Potential is there...

Okay,

Now that you took it from line rider I don't really mind. Since you can better steal a good idea, than come up with a bad one.
However, as said by others. It would be better to have the pointer change into the pencil and line then having below it and I couldn't give it much credit as for me (don't know if that is standard) I couldn't advance beyond the initial field. The arrow in the upper right corner failed.
Perhaps while you are add it, it would be possible to add objects that certainly work that you can paste in to your own line. Like a jump off, but where you sure the motorrider lands correctly and not drops because of a tiny mistake, for making a new line on top of the old one is always pretty difficult.

A little bit of work and your score would soar up in my view.

Jesuson responds:

Thanks for review.
I don't know why people doesn't like the draw tool, it's very simple to use,for straight lines one click at the end of the line, for not straight line keep the mouse button down, for a new line click the pencil icon again.
Anyway Still working on it.I will try to put your suggestion on it.
Bye!

copied

it would have been much better if it hadnt been copied off line rider. make it so the pen appears on the mouse and it draws from the pen and not above it