This was, in my opinion, rather lame.
While there were some mediocre graphics, the rest was lacking. The audio quality was too low, the animation was too cheap, and most important of all the JOKES were terrible. I think you should try to either use more detailed graphics, or spend more time on the actual animation. You should also reconsider your use of "cock jokes", and get proper audio, or atleast sharper audio to make it easier for viewers to understand the dialogue. Try again, and try harder. With some more effort put in I'm sure you can do it.