Reviews for Redlemon - Truly

[corb135]

Good Job, can't wait for more stuff like this

I must say, that was really good. Although in my opinion, in the beginning when that one guy is talking, you should turn down the volume on the music and up the volume on the guy talking, because that would set the mood far more effectively. Another thing, a lot of this seems extremely unrealistic without some sort of backstory explaining how he got his massive jumping abilities and how he can throw a guitar pretty much like a boomerang. Maybe thats the opening for a sequel that doubles as a prequel? The zombies I can understand, they were summoned by the "evil" being attacking the blonde chick.

The graphics were great, although the part where he is running to confront the one guy in his cloak, the running seems a little awkward. You may want to tweak it a bit. Also, when does he remove the cloak? It might be a cool addition to the movie, just have it done in slo-mo.

The fight scenes were very nice as well.

[Unreal-Me]

Very well drawn...

but needs less tween ;). With drawing skills like that, you should just do the whole thing fbf (or almost all of it). Tweening movements shows, and it kind of takes away from the awesome artwork (which lagged my computer :p). If you did a bit more frame-by-frame, it would probobly look a lot smoother.

although again, I must say, youz be one hell of a good artist :p

[JasonNight]

Not sure

I'm qusationable about it theres oem little that annoyed me like hwy didn't he the weapon with 2 hands? is cuz of that thing on his arm?
maybe it will answeared later on but I'm notuse about this, it was good
but just no sure.
good by the way

[1ink]

it was good

You have a lot of skill and talent as an artist but you're fairly lacking as an animator. The animation wasn't horrific but it certainly did the drawings no justice. Sound was good. The original preloader was decent but nothing special. In all fairness this would have been a 5 or 6/10 overall if not for the great drawings. So you fall at 4/5.

[Bensuit]

Realy good but

The story line sucks you need to work on that but the animation and sound are well done