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Reviews for "Redlemon - Truly"

Good Concept, but the flash lacks some what.

I liked it alot. Got a thing for evil VS good stuff ^^
Although it have some downsides...

First of all is the static and unfinished movements.
Dont just use one template arm and move it around like a flying arm.
Draw smooth movements and take time to finish it properly.

Second is using more special effects. The fight seems quite boring and quite predictable. Make it intresting, more smooth movement.

Third is the "Godlike" Main character, dont make him so powerfull so he can kill evrything. We need to develop feelings for them :P so make him bleed some, make it a fight wich he deserved to win, not just pusing "Kill" button.

Hope it helps ^^
I don't review flashes I dont like so ill give you a good score for evryhing that I like. Hope you improve and make more :D

LOVE from Essassin!

dude ...

man that was waaaay to much glow for my pc don't use so much even the bestest pc can lagg of it ! about your movie: it wan't that bad and the
characters looked nice the music got annoying at a time and so was the lagg try not to use soo much glow next time and you'll be good
keep it up!!

static

good art but the animation was static. maybe you should make characters who are easier to animate or perhaps make them simpler in the fighting scene. Also: it's good if you use 3D but make it more fluent. The music was good but the lack of further sound was annoying. overall pretty good, with a little work it could be very good.

well...

i can see u trying but.... practice on body art and moving art. i can tell youve been practicing the facil art of anime but... the others u lacked attention to. im not going to get into the other things . if youre going to make this kind of movie, just at least have really good art concept. for a good movie you need good art or a good storyline in it. keep trying, youll eventually make something appealing too everyone

Good music good graphs nice story (for first part)

Wow ^^. nice song fitting to the movie. relly good, *likes* the anime girl nice Graphics =). i hope u will do more movies i relly do =). Good luck!