Reviews for Mario's Revenge: SE

[Crazy-Train]

Found a few errors.

Grammatical mainly. im should be I'm or I am. That sort of error. That just shows lack of initiative. You really should have someone take a look at your flash before you post.

Anti-Clock. Who cares. Besides it pulls away from the Mario world. Example, Mario vs. Bowser at the beginning, why the strawberry. I just felt that if he went "superpower" it would have been a better choice to make a giga-Bowser (Super Smash Brothers Melee) to fight.

Dragon Ball Z is over used. Super Saiyan Mario was over the top. Maybe a much larger (bulky maybe) Mario would have been better. He could have become bigger by a mushroom. That would also bring the feel of the Mario games back to focus.

Besides these errors it was alright. Not my top ten list but wasn't a complete waste of time.

3/5
Good luck on your future flash productions.

[JrockSound]

mario....SJ.....

well... it was okay.... you shoulda worked on it a tad bit longer

[Ashfire55]

Pretty Decent but...

I really enjoyed the flash. It is obvious you put a lot of hard work and I give you props for that. The thing that i found was that nothing was original. Your grammar sucked and you basically ripped the story line from DBZ. Originality was lacking plus the fact that you used copyrighted sounds. I felt that if you wanted to dedicate more time for your own idea it would have been much better.

good job though and keep it up.

[Just-here-to-watch]

Preloader fun .

Funny preloader , heh when that message came ( When I'm typing this the movie is like 50% loaded ) It was already loaded ;P sorry ... I just had to tell

[Kerpizzle]

.....Wow.

I dont think it was very good...at all.
Go back to your clay-mation because this is just shit.

Well, you know its not like I like soap operas its just, that when you put a fight scene in every three seconds with a plot that sticks together as good as pennies and shit, it makes a crappy movie.

The only real good reason why I didnt give you a 0 is because there is room to improve, "The final hour is coming, It's time for your demise." Which makes no sense, if he didnt wait, then why say it? Stupid mistakes like that makes the wait for the animation come out even longer.

And this is in hatred of clocks? Why would you even do that? Who CARES about liking or not liking clocks.
And Peach didnt have to ressurect when Mario died, its stupid and pointless, making a little scene where you see a blond asian-eyed person walk up to a corpse and cry.

-Kerpizzle