More effort.
It lacks a good script, grammar and all around creativity. I see potential but it is still a LONG way from completion.
Reviews for "Mario's Revenge: SE"
Leuk en lekker lang!
Mijn complimenten het was een leuk filmpje ik vond het verhaal wel leuk en de muziek was Geweldig!!!
Salut!
van een nederlander!
Wow...
Okay here goes, the plotline of your story was practically borderline shit, the spoofs of clocks and the spoofs of dbz have long since been stretched and pulled to the infinite regions of creativity, mixing the 2 together doesn't make it any better. Your animation couldn't have lacked anymore detail, and sorry, not even good music can save this flash, nice try though, "oh this flash sux, insert good music here." Put more work into the next one please, and maybe just maybe come up with something original and I'll give you a review of applaud.
Okay
But the horrible dialogue should have been fixed.
nice but...
the humour would have been funnier with some voice acting...
i liked the part when Luigi killed the princess and faked his death... nice...
o and the final form of the clock mario wa siiiiiiiiccccckkkkk
man, those wings were awesome! and the patterns across his boddy were devine!
3/5 good movie i cant wait to see more of ya work! ^_^