Hm
Can't quite say it did it for me...an excellent music choice (that sounds so damn familiar...what's that from, some anime?) added a lot to what would have been a so-so movie at best. I can't say I understood what you were trying to do, so I won't try to tell you that you did a good or a bad job of it.
DEFINITELY didn't get the pills at the end. WTF, mate?