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Reviews for "{Dj-L} Lost In Time"

A dance of the Creatures of the Night

Dance my creatures, DANCE!!!!!!!!!

Its empty.

Almost lifeless. Drowning as the reality of it sets in. The beginning seems like confusion and hope that the unknown can be overcome. But by the end, the struggle was for nothing. The world fades away... or maybe just you. Nothing you do will matter... nothing matters anymore. You are no longer a part of the world you knew. It does get really repetitive at the end though. Just seems like your stretching it out. (excuse me if this makes no sense, I am kind of delusional at the moment)

Meonly70 responds:

I smiled as I read that. It does make sense, and its exactly what was going through my mind when I was making this song. I'm glad someone gets the same feeling.

yeah !

the intro is amazing but after with the melodie , we can't heard it because of the bass. you should up the melo or down the bass.
good work !!

i love listening to the same thing.... over and ov

Sounds great moves well. you used the same chord progression throughout the entire piece........ the same one! Change it up a little and maybe it'll help with the empty feeling that other guy was talking about.

Feels empty

The background octaves work well with the beat itself but I feel that you went in the wrong direction with them. Almost feel like ending on a high(er) note (with a bit of reverb to allow some fading away) before the other tracks kick in would've gave a more complete transition. Overall it isn't bad but around 2:00 I started to feel my back slouch, just felt like something was missing here, not sure on your intention but I felt that this piece could've picked up a bit more right around that area. If not that area than 2:48. This isn't a bad piece by any means, just feels a little empty.

~Tony