It's a Comic
Entertaining. Although I'm sure most Newgrounds members can't read, so....
Reviews for "VERONICA: Dark hobbies"
Emptygoddess responds:
I'd say they could, but they seem to have marked your review as helpful, so maybe they can't. Huh...
Nicely detailled
I think that you could certainly do with adding a little colour to the proceedings - it would be like Sin City, with making the blood stand out, for example. I think that the drawing style is excellent and even the occasional regressions (Yaoi?) frames that look a little simplistic with the art are well placed for the effect.
It's not a bad plot and the characters are certainly there for the pervert vote in the audience :P I think that developing these characters would be a wonderful thing.
The covers were nice and I think that perhaps some sort of 'centrefold' where you see a wonderfully animate picture of the girls doing something like when Veronica ran the guy over in the car - do that like the cover art in full colour and you'll have a great impact, before continuing the story to a triumphant conclusion.
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Emptygoddess responds:
Your reviews are well thought out, verbose, and thoughtful.
I'm not sure why you're here.
Interesting Tale
Dark and well written, the artwork is quite amazing and it's nice to see a complete story and quick progress, with the previous comic I was thinking we'd never see a part 2, so a complete story is welcome.
That said, I'm a bigger fan of the Zelda animations. Stick to the moving images, or go for a webcomic.
Emptygoddess responds:
I like your tail to. it is very stylish.
Cool
The comic was nice and makes you wonder the veracity of her story. Still in terms of navigation try to script the Keyboard arrow keys to move through the pages. Otherwise, good job.
Emptygoddess responds:
You seem to underestimate how lazy I am. Scripting? I'm still not even sure what that word means.
Engaging
I had forgotten myself in this by the end. You ever thought of getting published?
Emptygoddess responds:
I've been published, bitch.