good
i like ur flash and all, especially syslyphus or what's it's name (it is a bit hard to remember)
so i gave it 10/10 and 5/5
Reviews for "The Accident##"
CatFat responds:
wow, thanks for giving such positive reviews to All of my animations :S
thank you! :D
v good although could have been longer
well it was very good sean oh oops i told evry1 your real name lol ...anyway yh if you gave it an actuall story line i think it could be improved but over all good
CatFat responds:
well, ant every1 already knows my real name coz it's up there and u said u'd write a funny review...
Powerful Stuff
Unlike the review of ant-47, the fact the submission was so short made the piece that much more powerful. I can't say I felt good after watching it, but it was definitely very powerful.
CatFat responds:
ty u read my mind, although there is an alternative longer version of this that i made. although like u i think that short and simple is the most powerful!
Memorable.
First off I think it's important to say that no matter what the visible qualities of this flash were, the message was the most important part. Sure, it might not change anything but it's still something that needs to be hammered into the way people think.
Secondly, the graphics. The boys were incredibly well drawn Especially the one who ran away. I think I liked his drawing more because he didn't have a black outline like the other one. The way they moved was also very fluid and realistic. The way their hair was flung around was quite admirable, and if you could do the same with clothing I feel it would make it even better. Your call though, I don't feel it is absolutely necessary.
The blood was a little strange. It was very good in the first moments of spillage, but when it trickled down the road it seemed to be a little jerky an sudden. However, the glistening effect was very, very well done.
The truck could have had a little more than just a shape that moved, even if it was a very well drawn shape.
The backgrounds were superb. I really noticed the sun and how it gave the sky a red tint.
The sound was good. Realistic noises from the boys, the sound effects were good and there wasn't anything overly intrusive to the rest of the environment of the flash.
I think a replay button would have been appreciated, as it took more than one viewing to really appreciate everything, instead of having to wait a long time for it to go back to the start. I understand that you wanted people to take time out to read the message but if you left that about 4 or 5 seconds and then slowly faded a replay button in, that would be a little better I feel.
Concerning the writing, I think that the title was just a little too bright and harder to read than it could have been, and the font for the ending was just terrible. Everything else had a grace and smoothness to it and then the message was just jerky and harsh.
All in all, a very pleasing effort that makes me want to see more flash from you. Keep it up!
CatFat responds:
Im very pleased to see that my work taken into such consideration and people like you motivate me to do more and work harder. im so glad that you noticed the minor details that i had spent a lot of time on with the first boy only then to realise how small it was.. This had been a slightly rushed animation so aspects such as the blood weren't always handled with the utmost of care and the reason to why the message at the end was so badly displayed is because the document itself was already so small plus with me zooming in at the end, the text didn't contain enough pixels to present it properly.
The reason i haven't got a replay button on any of my animations, as you may have noticed, is because i simply don't know how to make one...damn.
Thank you for your amazing attention and consideration for my animation and i hope that you can find the time to review my future animations.
at least it has a moral
ok graphics no real interactivity,
but it has a moral
CatFat responds:
yh moral always makes up for everything else doesnt it!?lol