Pretty Cool.
I thought it was pretty good, and the song was pretty cool. When i buy a DS, Phoenix Wright is the first one on my 'To Buy' list.
Reviews for "Mia's Elegy"
Beautiful song.
You know, I REALLY should review more submissions.
I love this song, although I can see why John-Thomas thought it could be considered "funny". April May screwing around with the camera, "Argh! I blinked!", and of course, "My first love. I love green screens", along with "KILL!" are all in the region of humour. Please understand that the song MAY be depressing/sad, but the pictures are humorous.
Also, before I leave, how did you get Phoenix's "Spring Break" suit? Thanks in advance!
Almost forgot to "rank" it fully! On the plus side, the song is VERY well suited for the flash, the characterization is also amazing for each, and the custom "Spring Break" is also great.
However, there ARE some problems. 1. If there's ANYONE Mia never met, it's Franziska. She was in Germany until one year after Mia died!
2. I think that you should edit the accidentally shifting Mia Fey sprites in certain frames. She SHOULD remain in the same area when she's speaking and standing in place.
Hey, I may be a tough reviewer, but I believe that everyone should perfect their talents.... and YOU, my friend, have talent.
Xenolord responds:
I thank you for this rather lengthy, but honest review. Let me address a few things you questioned.
Pictures: Okay, I admit. I made the pictures to be somewhat funny, my bad. I thought I might break up the melodrama a little.
Phoenix's "Spring Break" Suit: That was a complete accident. Apparently, the .bmp of Phoenix didn't translate too well into .jpeg, so it got discolored. Instead of FIXING it, like I probably should have, I kept it, and just called it his "Spring Break" Suit.
Problems to Address:
Mia Not Meeting Franziska: I can solve that with two, simple words. Alternate. Universe. This movie was not meant to be canon in any sense of the word. Besides, to my best knowledge, Mia wasn't a lesbian, so I kinda took some liberties. Hope that's okay.
Skipping Sprites: This seems to be a rather reduntant, annoying problem I have. I'm not sure what the real problem is, but I'm working on fixing it. I'm almost done re-syncing this, so I'll re-post it then. Check back later.
I don't mind tough reviews if they bring up some valid points, which you my friend, did exponentially. keep up the good constructive critisism bombs! And drop a few more one me, would ya?
Pretty good
It was fairly interesting, your choice of music was pretty good, so yeah, good job.
Loved the song...
But, the sprites totally screwed it up, i mean, i don't think symphonic metal fits with Phoenix Wrong, you could have made something animated, instead of using sprites, would have been much better.
Xenolord responds:
It's not freakin' Phoenix Wrong! I just wanted to use Phoenix Wright sprites!
Unoriginal.
But I think it's good enough to pass. It's like one scene from Phoenix Wrong, and if that's quality, this is too.