Dude
Stop, Please stop. And why did you review your own movie?
Reviews for "Dave the Snail: Cannon"
Plytanium responds:
wait what?
Awesome!
So cute and creative! I loved it!
Plytanium responds:
thank you:D
ok. read up. ill give some suggestions
well, it seems like ur getting the hang of flash. u just need to fix a few things. the sound clips got really annoying how they kept repeating. ur movement is still a little choppy, and doesnt flow together. like how ur net bounces but the snail stays in the same spot. BUT that doesnt mean all hope for u is lost. u have to start somewhere :) and ur starting off well! i mean compared to a lot of other people's beginning flash. ur very well off! u already have an interesting style. it just needs smoothing up. dont u dare stop making flash movies! ull only get better.
I gave it a blam cause
That looping music seriously made me want to kill myself. Please, if you resubmit this change that annoying ass music. Plus the snail moved like, um, a snail. It took him like 2 minutes to get to the damn cannon, so it was a reall waste of time. So pretty much cut it down in time and lose that music, PLEASE!
Otherwise great graphics.
1/5