Moving
this is one special series, i loved your references to the previous episodes. did you know that you were going to use that red head from the first episode? cause when i looked back at the first episode i found her to be very noticeable, your eyes wandered to both the read hair and the "angel" even if it was an accident it was one that was very good. congratulations on having one of the most moving series that i have every seen.
REASONING: for humour i gave it a five because of the irony that he was shot by the guy that he knocked out in episode one.
also that he was a little emo kid.
very moving and if you could pick up all the subltlty then more power to you.
good work mate