It actually wasnt that bad...
Dude to be straight up with you, this was pretty intense, but its probobly gonna get blammed beacuse it was really short, and kinda simple, but i think if you actually went back and redid this, you could make a pretty kick ass game.....
like i gave this one a five, beacuse i thought it was pretty much hilarious, but ya, there is DEFINATLY room for improvemnt
and if you do make anotherf one, message me before you put it on the portal
overall, good job