Almost there, but with 2 absolutely enormous flaws
Cool concept, except it was executed a little slowly and sluggishly. Maybe no one else ran in to this (or no one actually managed to play it very far, which I would think is more likely) but the stairs above the cocoon room are not useable. You can go up but you can't go down. Nevertheless, its still very very cool. Re-submit it with some extra work and it will be a sure fire 10.