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Reviews for "Charater Battle I"

Well maybe next time...

Just some things I would like to point out about trends like sprite flashs on Newgrounds and your flash specifically.
-Sprite flashs are a trend for a reason they won't last long and often die off sooner or later so you're better off finding a different style.
-For some reason some sprite flashs get automatic negative feedback because of the style some sprite flashs are extremely well done just
-Not sure what was going on in your flash; really no "real" storyline
-Can't really rate your properly on graphics since sprites are normally just put together in a flash by an "animator" who takes the sprites from a site that offers them or from a fellow NG member who helped in making them
I do not mean to be negative just my thoughts on sprite animations and yours just some advice. Keep trying though and maybe you'll get there.

I gave it a 1 beacause it had Sonic in it.

I really did not like it. WTF was going on in it? I mean not event a story. You could of made it seem like Smash Brother or something. I really do not know what you where tring to make but please save us the time and do not make pt. 2. If you do make a pt.2 please lable it : That Video that Sucked and Yeah I Was Asked Not To Make pt.2 But I Am Not Bright So I Made Pt.2 Any Way.

Needs a lot of work

This flash needs a number of improvements if you ever want a shot at any sort of achievement/award on Newgrounds:
1. Keep the charecters on-screen: Tails is gone, then reappears after the explosion, only to immediately leave when Sonic appears? That isn't good.
2. Bad frame rate: It goes with the above, but on a bigger level, for Sonic was only on screen for 1 or 2 of every three frames after attacking Tails.
3. Sound effects: Unless this is meant to be a silent film, you could give a good try at giving some sound effects in the flash during the battles.
4. Backround enviroment: You should at least have something going on in the backround so we at least see where the battle happens: how about a drawing of a forest, or an animation of a town?
5. Music: It was ok, but you could have made a better choice to go with the tempo of the scene.

I think there is potential for improvement on the flash, but it looks like you will have to go spend a few weeks/months to be able to create something both original and of high quality. Good luck.....

PicoZX responds:

Thanks you.

I like DDR

Nothing was good but the DDR music. The thing skipped frames and wasn't good at all. Plus the screen was too big.

PicoZX responds:

" Sweet little bumble bee "

:)