Well maybe next time...
Just some things I would like to point out about trends like sprite flashs on Newgrounds and your flash specifically.
-Sprite flashs are a trend for a reason they won't last long and often die off sooner or later so you're better off finding a different style.
-For some reason some sprite flashs get automatic negative feedback because of the style some sprite flashs are extremely well done just
-Not sure what was going on in your flash; really no "real" storyline
-Can't really rate your properly on graphics since sprites are normally just put together in a flash by an "animator" who takes the sprites from a site that offers them or from a fellow NG member who helped in making them
I do not mean to be negative just my thoughts on sprite animations and yours just some advice. Keep trying though and maybe you'll get there.