its just not upbeat enouf
you should try to make people happy with you ablity to make flash flims not try to depress them, not that im saying that you are a bad persion for makeing this short film.
Reviews for "KAZAHANA: Beneath a Tree"
Interesting.. But..
It would of been better if you let the emo slit her wrist at the end.
Well. Erm. Simply well.
A sad tale about a girl sitting under a tree,Yet a simpel cliffhanger. Is this even a episode of the Kazahana series? I mean it dosent even have the intro. Oh well GJ anyway but please dont do cliffhangers.
Garrr
Man this poem was soooo EMMMOOOOOOO.. well I respect art.. but I have never found poetry to be much of anything, they dont stir hope and they come from the darkest reaches of a persons heart, what good is art if it doesnt bring out the light in people.. so to rate this I would say 6/10.. and couldnt the next poem be about I dont know picking flowers and how glorious life is when the sun is out and the birds are chirping? hahahaa.. man that sounds so gay.. fine keep your emo-ic literature! >.<
Just another dot...not on my radar
I mean what the fuck I hate angst ridden disasters and Im 18!!!Why doesnt she just DO something rather than whining about w/e 'god'. Poem was..ok, not great. Her voice was weird, kind of childish. Who the fuck mocks a girl under a tree, those assholes!!!Sorry, agittated...yeah.Maybe we could have seen who the radar holder was, or at least a shade...that's it.