Too vague
If it were part of a longer episode or series, it would work great. But as short as it is, it leaves too many unanswered question to gain a real sense of her struggle. I guess what I'm saying is to really bring out the urgency of a heavy emotional scene like this one, you've got to have some back story of how she ended up like that in order for a viewer to really get emotionally attached to her character. I was left wondering what caused her to separated from her family.
The poem and voice acting were great. The music was good too.