I agree with Dorque
Its OK, its got sound its got humour its got a little story and its got RANDOM!
Theres probably more you could do with the sound and you should credit Queen within the movie.
You might try putting in a couple of relevent links- nuclear power/dumping wikipedia, the right page of Greenpeace or something, but its OK as it is.
Don't be so hard on yourself
Ok, it wasn't amazetastic, but this was way better than most "first-time" animations. Keep at it and you'll be hitting those portal ranks sooner than you think.
hey not bad....
i like this.... i like how you ended it...that was funny... you should keep on working on things like this...
Not bad, not bad.
I like how you drew the people, and the music fits well. Good job for your first.
perfect music for it
This was a very nice stick film good job on your first. I just thought the music worked perfect for this film. There wasnt much violence but good effort on your first try nice film man continu making them.