It was too short
This flash was good and all but it was way too short. I like Bleach alot so I'd like to see more bleach shorts.
Reviews for "Bleach Shorts #1"
good flow
see u got inspired by one of the earlier episode ( think its around 44 45 :P)
when ichigo is fighting whatever his name is >.< cant remember that freaks name :S anyways its a well made flash with a good flow and good timing on the sound
distance
The initial flash was good a little too short, but what really struck me was that they were really close. Heck, Ichigo could have sucker punched him at that distance.
ehh
Make it a little longer
Very good
I would have preffered a little battle or even if we got see senbonzakura's petals but otherwise well done :)
About the one guy's comment saying you spell wrong... there weren't any spelling errors either so that's also extremely good :)