Fine Animation
The animation was impressive for the fact that you cut corners in the right places to keep memory usage down without making the overall visual suffer. It looked slick. The sound needs to be a little clearer and the volume needs to be more consistant because I had a hard time hearing certain parts. The piece needs to be cut tighter because there are a few scenes that had too much dead air. Scenes like when the chalk hits the floor and when the girl jumps out the window would have been better served if sound effects were attached to the actions. Your name should be written properly on the copyright notice at the end of the piece - it's missing the "S". I know I've made a lot of comments on how the piece could be improved, but I wouldn't have done so if I didn't think you had a talent for Flash animation. The animation definitely shows you know what you're doing and I look forward to checking out more of your stuff!