Hey guys!
If something is not going to have any animation in it, it better be very funny. Some of your jokes where ruined by little comments you added afterwords. For instance the twisty tie joke would have been funnier if you said it and then moved on. I have seen this kind of thing before done much more effectively I think it helps if you have a stronger main character since he wil be talking throughout the whole thing. That being sid this is the first thing that you guys have made that I could get through without being immensely pissed off.