it was pretty good but needed some work
graphics-you used sprites. that was okay but im seeing pictures of your characters (forgot the names already sorry) of only sprites of the faces and body cut off. Try using better sprites with full body if you could find one.
Style-I see that you were trying to follow the story and you did that very well with the movie. Kind of different flash from which ive normally seen. Using sprites from Mario was a very funny and good way to make your flash stand out a little bit more
humor-the voice of the narrator I believe that was played by you. and the way you kept humor in this story made me laugh a few times in this flash. Great job.
Overall-3.04
Sound-If you did the voice acting for this flash. Great job. The voice you used was very amusing for this flash.
violence-some blood when the story was about to end and somefighting.