Not so bad
u have to read very fast so u can read but if u read u cant see the action thats something not so cool xD also try to make it longer they die too fast n they all died in the same place i think that sucks xD but i liked it ^^
Reviews for "DeathArena"
HomerDough responds:
thanks
It was alright
It needs to be a little longer though.
HomerDough responds:
ok
It was ok...
It was pretty good, except the sounds and graphics were kind of...how to put this...Lame. Other than that though it was highly creative, and the viewers i think got the message of what was happening. So good job...and i read the thing under the play menu, it said u answered stuff in here. So i was wondering if u could tell me how the hell u got a flash portal...if u dont get this its ok.
HomerDough responds:
huh?
fun to watch, though a bit short
The characters may be just blobs, but at least they've got a fair sense of squash and stretch.
The arenas are a bit sloppy, but that's not too terrible. Just something to work on to further improve it.
What I reckon would really help take it to another level and not be too hard is if the commentary was vocalised. If you've got a good voice, shout it all into a mic. Or get someone from the VoiceActingClub to do it, like a proper presenter. That'd be cool.
What made this though, is the idea. It's been done before, but I suppose it's something with serious lasting appeal.
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Anyway, it was fun to watch, though a bit short.
HomerDough responds:
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(Translation) Thanx
Shows some effort
Notbad, could use some more effort in the audio, and maybe a tad long aswell abit more detail all around, for the mostpart it was good, and i liked it, just work on those few things though.
Abit more effort needed.
~X~
HomerDough responds:
eqw