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Reviews for "-Pina Story-"

My review

Graphics- was great, cool light effects
Style- i like japan ninjas, beatiful and true armors on pigs
Sound- good job
Violence- good job
Interactivity- this movie was pretty slow
Humor-some good jokes, but you cant combinate humor with action good
Overall- i hope to see the continue of this movie, but PLZ! make faster movies
Bleskojd

gener8ion responds:

firstly thank you~
and I really must learn how to make those fast forward button things~~~
I am still learning :(

Good but too slow

First, let me say that the artwork in this cartoon is beautiful, and it was actually fairly good, and I'm surprised that you managed to do something with a length this long (very ambitious)

However, the actual animation, acting, and plot were all very limited. I wouldn't think a ninja would want to kill every single guard without a good reason (it should be a fast in/out job without a disturbance, right?). Also, the animation lacked any fluidness or any sense of weight.

My biggest gripe with the cartoon is the timing. Some sequences were too slow or held on for too long, and the cutting of the cartoon is really too choppy. The whole piece just doesn't flow naturally.

Don't get me wrong, it's still good, but I'd "study" other professional cartoons (stick to movies or anything done from 1940-1960 not on television. Television cartoons like this also tend to be drawn out waay too long, like Dragonball Z). Also, go on YouTube and watch videos where people do flips and jumps to get a sense of how humanoid creatures should move

gener8ion responds:

I think this is helpful information.
I am looking to always improve and your pointing out the sections helps me think, so thank you so much for your indepth review~

I hope to keep that in mind for my next movie~~

Sweet

Nice style.

His mail box is really Unit 6, not Unit 9, just the 6 flipped over, so did he do the mission that was meant for someone else?

gener8ion responds:

yes~ that's what the whole story was based :)

Good ninja movie.

Good job. This is very good ninja movie and i can recomend this to anyone, who likes action movies.
Sadly there were couple rock music clips I didn't like because I think rock isn't best choise in this theme.
Second, What happened to ninja's sister?

enjoyed it.

It was a nice flash I have to admit. it was obvious that you took your time with it and that i appreciate seeing. at times it did seem to drag on a bit but o well it was still good. i really enjoyed watching all the boars die and the little bits of humor. the ending for me was the best part when you see that his address sign was broken. it just made me happy. very good and i hope you keep making more flashes.