better than part one
cat: 3
mouse:0
the lightbulb gag. old but affective. you got one ha out of that. sticking with the cartooish feel the two demensional parts were ignorable. the shotgun part perdictable with needed to show the threat of them.
i was going to give a 3/5 but you again get a small laugh out of him so now you have a 4/5.
K
^^Good Points^^
This series seems to be getting slightly better with each episode. This episode had the best graphics so far. There were some good effects, and the camera was always changing. The storyline was pretty creative, I liked what you did in this episode.
^^Needs Improving^^
Same as last time, pretty much the only sound in this is the music. There is a lot going on with this movie but no sound effects to back things up.
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Getting better
I've had a thought about why Sherbert's movement looks so wooden. Maybe you should try giving him knees, since his legs move with the stiffness of a few pieces of 2x4. That's my inspirational thought for today's review. (Remember that cat's knees bend backwards on the hind legs)
Still, you're getting better with your animation and although the plot isn't really to my taste, I'd say you're certainly getting to grips with the animation tecniques. The audio sounds crisp and clear too, so a good job there.
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Great Job!
Improve
Nothing really except you can add a little more. When Sherbert killed all the mouses, when the black screen shrank to a circle around Sherberts head, Sherbert could've winked. That would've been cool. Otherwise, there was nothing really bad about it.
4/5
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It was allright.
(- The Good -)
Nice music and sound effects. The characters were drawn rather well and you put a lot of effort into animating. You put links in your preloader which is good and the opening was also pretty funny and a solid start.
(- The Bad -)
The plot wasn't exactly original and you could have worked out a better one before you started. At times the animation was very slow like the words were being typed up in that ball thing. It could have been very good apart from the slowdown.
(-- Overall --)
Not a bad flash but a bit unoriginal with wacky characters thrown in. Keep it up.
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