I think you've crafted something quite special here. The comic's paced in such a way that it sucks you in all the way from beginning to end. I love how information is trickled in over the course of each iteration but the general premise is established rather quickly. I love how you chose to convey motion and direction. The balance between serious and silly seems just right. The counterbalance between Bone's Jin-Roh-esque armor and Miki's beachgoer/lifeguard design immediately speaks to the characters themselves. I felt like a kid once again reading the comic and immediately thought I had to find more, and lo and behold... It seems you've already been posting for quite a while. I was glad my efforts were rewarded- although I do hope you upload the remainder of the webcomic here on NG as well.
This is the kind of stuff I would have loved to stumble across in Heavy Metal Magazine, and, frankly, the quality here is definitely on par.
I eagerly await further installments in this series.
Keep at it,
-CO