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^^Good Points^^
The storyline wasn't too bad. It was a little bit funny just because of how random and strange it is, but I got some entertainment out of it.
^^Needs Improving^^
This submission was just really weird. First off, didn't really like the characters. The one had that really high voice, and the other talked like an idiot. The animations weren't great, try to work on them. You will get better though with more practice.
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I'm practicing alot don't worry.
lol Thoughs were me and Jays real voices ouch.
Work in progress
Well, your style lacks finesse, but there is certainly a few bits and pieces which you can refine over time. The animation isn't very fluid in my eyes and the sound quality is a little off in places. Personally, I'd suggest not using the voice like Foamy's as a bad guy, since he talked 3-4 times too fast for us to understand.
Still, the plot could be really good, if it's been fleshed out a bit, so don't be disheartened, just carry on and write some better material, I'm sure you'll learn some great techniques to make this a whole load better.
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Thanks man. Yeah I'm not going to fix this one anytime soon. I've been getting better and better with each Duders flash. I'll keep this one to remind me how the duders original looked and to watch it for a pathetic laugh.
Nice, just a couple bugs to work out...
Lets start, well the mic changed volumes...The voices were quite and then lowd, but that was not the worst part, the voices overlapped terrible. I couldn't understand.
The graphics also went down a bit someways through the movie, that could be fixed.
But the jokes were good, I must have laughted about three times and smiled lots more. Especially at the entrance of the emo killer and the 'mass suicide'; classic.
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Thanks man.
Yeah, I'm getting one of 'em good and expensives mics soon hopefully. I'm still learning but I think I'm getting better.
Lol....silly emo's...
It was pretty good, lol, silly emo's.....
Thanks... Hehe, silly emos.
THE AUDEO sucks!!!!!!!!
The audeo sucked get a better mic
Okay buy me mic bitch.
lol see ya at school Rick.