Needs to be longer - good job.
I liked it, it's a bit too short to get on newgrounds, but you got something there. Just if it doesn't get on newgrounds doesn't mean it's not good. Make longer stuff and I'll vote you more than 1 - gotta take care of my blam points ya know.
I know thank you for your good response :D I hope you dident vote 1 for sure because it prob wil get blamd and then il prob be pisd off again . You know im not that great animator with patience :D So please dont vote 1 and btw if you gote take care fo your blam points use it at Very SHORT AND CRAPPY animations :D Because i like this one :D bye
im not a fan of stick movies...
since they dont take that much of effort, however gave me a giggle and for that ill give you a 5 ;)
work in graphics, avoid sticks next time
Thank you Kecho :D
You Guys Love Showing Up With First Flash
Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm..............
.... This is indeed a little awkward. Usually I yell at ppl that show their faces with 1st Flash because they don't spend enough time on it. U must think ur sumthing don't ya? Well let me tell ya something, YOU ARE!!!!!!!!!!!!! On rare occasion someone shows up with brilliant 1st flash and ur one of them!!!!!!!! Let's review. Graphics, obviously u're the one in a few that actually spends time on their first flash and I can tell from this, these graphics were good and if ur aiming for better, I recommend trying to go for a sky layer for excellent show of detail. Style, not much style to this one since this is pretty common, big fight with build up which just leads to a random event where the winner dies anyways, u won't get a good score or a bad score in this category. Sound, I'll give a slightly above average score in this category since it wasn't bad but some of the files are commonly used. Violence, OH THE VIOLENCE, of course since it's a fight scene, there is a bunch of violence. Interactivity, it's not a game so I'll do wat I usually do and not count the Interactivity in this review. Humor, not so much since the random event is no longer, well, random in current day flash movies but I'll give u an average score anyways for the attempt. Overall, pretty average but I'm still startled about the fact that this is pretty good for a 1st flash which isn't very common around here and man I tell ya, it warms my heart when I see a 1st flash pop up that's actually pretty good. I say with a little bit of practice, u will be going somewhere around here!
It as alright,
but the laughing was just too much. All the other sound effects were nice. And it didn't look too bad neither.
Yeah lol i kno but i like To Much vocal like i call it :D Realy thanks for your comment :D God bless u !:D
Well, um...
It has a good idea, I didn't laugh, but I felt like I was going to. I voted a 2, even when you don't deserve it. Make it longer and you'll survive in NG.
You are right but still im not sure wy i dident deserve it :( because i get quickly bored after 2 days animating . Thank you anyway !