Creative but needs more
It's a really good idea that you started with. Unfortunately it becomes slow. The story line needs to be quick and witty for an idea like this. You COULD try to redeem it by doing more episodes like this however. But other things that could be improved are the sound quality (you can hear it flicker in and out), voice acting (needs more variety and emotion), and animation (some parts didn't sync well with the voicing). But great idea and i'd like to see some more!
dont take this personally...
but PLEASE wait until you go through puberty and ur voice gets deeper before you do your own sound again >_<
Not Funny
Wow, first off the graphics were horrid. secondly is that the voices sounded like you were 12. Not only that but the lip syncing wass way off and the animation was also pretty bad.
The joke was not funny at all and you really need to improve on that. Also an appropriate background would have been nice and not just white... It looked like you put little effort into this