If you like zombies and stupidity watch this
Over all Sound Quality was good Graphics where Decent being original was awsome the part with them being Aladin and Jasmin i laughed my ass off i like this cuz it has zombies and stupidty i think you did an over all good job and recomend this to anybody who enjoyrs a good Flash keep up the good work! i gave this a 8-10
smiling throughout and chuckling here and there
The new intro was quite amusing - I chuckled at the hit.
I liked the way you've added some shading .
There were a few chucklesome moments - I found Gary's laugh hilarious for some reason and I really liked the 'getting off' at the end. Also, I liked the doctor's intermissions.
There are a few graphical problems - the tweening is kinda cheap, the near-constant smiles, Max's hands that stay on the blanket, occasional background colours not stretching to the ends of the frame (during intro and all of credits)... Some more expressions could really add some visual humour - Gary's broad smiling part was cool and it'd be good to see more of that.
Btw, I meant to mention earlier that I liked the J.P logo you made.
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It's a series of cheap laughs and fairly obvious jokes. However, you tend to keep it going at a brisk pace and there are a few surprises along the way. Graphics are something that could be improved, but all in all, this episode managed to get me smiling throughout and chuckling here and there.
average
Voice acting and sound i thought was very good. Graphicly it didnt do it for me, but i have to say the style of art used was different and original from what i normally see.
It's decent... for flash
You need to work on Pacing. Don't record each phrase separately and glue them back together in Flash. Perhaps establish a human pace of conversation in one large audio file, and animate to it. I'd strongly suggest adding some music, and purchase a better mic for vocals, because the soundtrack was my biggest problem with this piece. Don't get me wrong, it's got potential, but I'm also not a fan of the "paper doll" style of animation, where you draw all the characters' limbs separately and tween the crap out of them.
I'm trying not not to bash. I saw "Rude Boy" and expected a cartoon even vaguely related to ska (I was even prepared to put up with Third Wave ska!) It's obvious quite a bit of time was spent on this, so you deserve more constructive criticism than one of those "It's ghey/It sux" reviews.
Excellent job on the Front Page, but if you want to be above typical Newgrounds material, consider paying more attention to the audio, because it has an incredible impact on the piece as a whole.
You tried to hard to be funny.
You tried way to hard to be funny. You used stereotypes like crazy, you used "classic" and predictable jokes like when Kelly looked outside of her window, and your animation itself just didn't flow. People would come on screen and then disappear in an instant. If you want to make a cartoon, please put more effort into it than this. Maybe I'm being to harsh, but someone needs to tell it to you like this is. You get a 2 out of 10.