If you like zombies and stupidity watch this
Over all Sound Quality was good Graphics where Decent being original was awsome the part with them being Aladin and Jasmin i laughed my ass off i like this cuz it has zombies and stupidty i think you did an over all good job and recomend this to anybody who enjoyrs a good Flash keep up the good work! i gave this a 8-10
You tried to hard to be funny.
You tried way to hard to be funny. You used stereotypes like crazy, you used "classic" and predictable jokes like when Kelly looked outside of her window, and your animation itself just didn't flow. People would come on screen and then disappear in an instant. If you want to make a cartoon, please put more effort into it than this. Maybe I'm being to harsh, but someone needs to tell it to you like this is. You get a 2 out of 10.
It's decent... for flash
You need to work on Pacing. Don't record each phrase separately and glue them back together in Flash. Perhaps establish a human pace of conversation in one large audio file, and animate to it. I'd strongly suggest adding some music, and purchase a better mic for vocals, because the soundtrack was my biggest problem with this piece. Don't get me wrong, it's got potential, but I'm also not a fan of the "paper doll" style of animation, where you draw all the characters' limbs separately and tween the crap out of them.
I'm trying not not to bash. I saw "Rude Boy" and expected a cartoon even vaguely related to ska (I was even prepared to put up with Third Wave ska!) It's obvious quite a bit of time was spent on this, so you deserve more constructive criticism than one of those "It's ghey/It sux" reviews.
Excellent job on the Front Page, but if you want to be above typical Newgrounds material, consider paying more attention to the audio, because it has an incredible impact on the piece as a whole.
Lame
Super lame need I say more.
Hells yes!
It seems that the farther along I get in this flash, the worse the animation gets, and the more I laugh! What the hell was up with Kelly's head?! And Enrice's?! And HOLY SHIT Doctor Science and his "WAOWAOWAOW"! I swear, he looked more like a zombie than Max.
Because you didn't take the appearance of this flash any more seriously than you did the content, it is a phenomenal success. Sweet deal!