lol pretty good!
It was a pretty cool vid, it reminded me of a Foamy rant though (not sure if thats good or bad). You should submit more, I'm sure that they'll make it through the portal.
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Got the idea.
I think you need to spend more time on your flash works, it's a great topic, but lacking in... well, alot. Keep trying.