Give it some work
Give the thing some work and that flash can turn out to be a NewGrounds Smash Hit. Try with some music in the background. Personally i would go for the Song from the film About A Boy Sung by Badly Drawn Boy. If you dont know it,it goes like this.
Ive beeeeeeeen Dreaaaaaaaming. I Dont know the rest but Oh well.
-Valentine
Certain aspects were good but some problems...
It was too short, I was really enjoying your animation and the sounds, they were very good but it just seemed to have gotten cut off abruptly.
Was there a story there? If there was I couldn't pick up on it, it's like you didn't finnish it.
I encourage you to remake this but longer so you can fit a story in, then it'll be great with animation like that.
In any case, good luck with your next animation :)
that was goodish
ya good point where is the rest but overall it ok good nice art work and add some more to it i didnt really get it but if you keep working on it this could be a great flash
Looking good...
...now where's the rest? The graphics were brilliant, although there is a bit of lag when lots of elements are being moved at the same time. The story sounded promising and you have gotten off to a good start, but shows us everything with your second project.
Then I'll add three more points to the overall score.
Work on it more!
Something unfinished like this I would normally be inlcined to blam. However it has some potential because your art is very good. Now does the boy get eaten by the dog? Does the dog get eaten by the boy? Does the boy find true love with the dog and found a restaurant in the jungle? These are answers that I do not find in this flash. So come on Brooke, buck up and finish this.
I like your response!!!! Fair call. I've just seen some ugly portals and I knew my graphics were better. I couldn't wait i guess.
Thank you anyway.