Great.
It's great and all, but the guy started rambling and forgot he was talking about weed. He just messed with your mind saying there are worse things to worry about. And yeah, I agree. It's a natural plant, but do you want to know what's unnatural? Chopping that plant up, rolling it in paper, and smoking it to get high. It may not be the worst drug out there, but it is a drug with very real dangers.
i love the message.
okay, i know i heard this skit on comedy cental presents before, but i'm not sure who did it. any way whoever did it, the message wasso much clearer with subtitles and music. seriously. so thanks for giving me this quilk veiw on the between the lines.
okay... i know you were hoping 4 a better score, everytime anyone submits anything they want a good score, so let me say i'm sorry. but i'm not gonna be an ass and not tell you why i din't score you higher.
1st the attempt at lip syncing was allright at best. if nothing else, you should have had the mouth move only when sounds come out. then if you wanted it to be a lot better, theres this thing you do to make the mouth move correctly to sounds. i can't remember the correct name for that but cheack out the lip syncing tutorials in the newgrounds tutorial section. they help a lot.
2nd there wasn't enough movements. i've seen bad mouth movements make it to newgrounds front page, just so long as theres something going on. the least you could have done was make the head a symbol and tween it around. for future referance you have to bring a character to life. make hi walk around, when he shows an emotion, make his whole face move not just his eye brows. i've seen it do wonders to animations. maybe.... if you re do this yet again, show the cars outside the drive-thru, give some backrounds. make it more life like.
okay, the break down is, just keep working. i think the message is great, but it's hard to sit through the whole movie to get the whole message. with a bit of work, your ideas are great s your animations could be too. i just think you have to put more effort into them.....
idk maybe im just being harsh. i wish you all tens and higher, but if not just keep working. good luck, it'shard out there for an animation pimp.
Meh...
Anybody can steal a track of some guy yapping and draw some crappy art to go with it. Next time, Use your own work.
Come on!
the song offers soo much for you to animate on and yet the majority of your movie has a poorly drawn figure whose mouth doessnt match the lyrics. ANIMATE what hes saying in the song! it would be much better.
Stole
u stole a song and put it on the net ILLEGAL MISTER