It was ok.
The drawings need some work. The graphics weren't all that great either.
It was a bit too short and I didn't really get a feeling for why any of this was happening. Why was the girl crying? Perhaps a bit more of a story would help?
Also I didn't care for how it looped, perhaps when it's over you could add a replay button?
But with all that said, it was ok, good job. Good luck on your next one :)