Reviews for PW: Inspired Justice 2

[Little-Rena]

Could use work

Well, for one, the graphics did look alittle blured in parts, like they where distorted and some of the sprites you used just didn't fit in with the background they where used in because of the cut off marks.

The quality of sound was also another thing I came upon, it was pritty poor, some sounds where really crackly and others where muffled, try adjusting the quality of the sound when you come to export it.
And the actual sound clips you used, I didn't really find most of them funny, try to use a wider selection of sounds.

Also, the quality of the buttons, they looked very poor, although they did do there job fine, they just didn't look very good, try to improve the look of them.

The ending was probably the best part, not because it was over but because you used other sprites along with the PW sprites, that was good in a way.

Anyway, just fix up the sound and graphics problems and I'm sure you can make a better one :)

Good luck with future flash words.

2/5

<3

Sunrie responds:

I don't know how, why, or where they sprites looked blurred. Unless, of course, you're talking about some of the ending sprites which were resized to fit the backgrounds. Traced bitmap 1, 1, pixels, so they came out how they looked originally. As for the cutoff marks, you're really picking straws with it. Look at previous Phoenix Wrongs and you can see a lot worse.

If the sound seems poor, it's because of your system, not because of the animation. All audio was edited outside of Flash in Sony Vegas Professional 6.0 and optimized in Flash on the export. As for the variety of sounds, it was 7 different movie quotes and 7 different songs...how much wider variety do you want?

The buttons were poor, but did their job? Talk about nit-picking. I wasn't about to spend another 40 minutes developing uber looking buttons for a simple click task at the END of the movie. Had they been important during the rest of the animation, then of course they would recieved more attention. Talk about paper-tiger syndrome.

The ending did take the most time and is one of my favorite scenes. I was going for a "never-ending party" thing.

There are no graphic and sound problems. This is one of the higher Phoenix Wrong submissions on the Portal, lead only by three others, so I don't really think "a better one" is the correct statement to make.

I think you mean "future flash works". Good luck on future flash reviews and grammar.

2/5 for at least writing understandably

[Vaatithewindwarrior]

@fantom253
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those are spirit mediums from kurain village...aka
Maya,Pearly (pearly,pearls,pearl),uhh not ini.. well thats ----MIA.YEAH.Those are 3 I know of -_- besides pearlys aunt morgan .-.

[KidBuukicksass]

ehhhhh?

Man thats um thats kinda typical and nothing very funny..phhh..ummm I think this is why I think good series will always die...like foamy and skittles n' bits among others...you just kinda run outta usable material. Every now and then something new will pop its head out and it will breathe some extra life into a desperate series whose artist trying to keep a style alive,but getting decent things to work with are getting all to rare these days. A sad day indeed.

Sunrie responds:

What's sad is your user name, your use of grammar and your profile picture. While not in the collection as long as some of the others, this one was out long before many other Phoenix Wrong submissions that use some of the clips that I have.

This seems to have become "the Phoenix Wrong to make fun of" for whatever reason. I think it's more "Fucking morons jumping on a bandwagon that one cuntbag started for no good reason".