nice story idea
I like
nice story idea
I like
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^^Good Points^^
The second episode, and another great one. So far this series is looking like a great one. It was funny how intricate this episode was, and how you actually wrapped everything up eventually that didn't make much sense in the beginning. Very creative.
^^Needs Improving^^
Nothing specific I can think of at this point. Great job.
That was awesome!
very very cool episode, very well thought out, I liked the whole thing over all.
Thought it was gonna loop....
That made my head hurt. Funny though. How long did it take to make this?! -12 Hours?!
Cool!
Heh really cool! Funny how it went back to the beginning then back to the present then it showed he got the sandwich! Nice one!