Needs more loopability
It's a pretty good piece the only thing i have against it is the fact that when you reach the end the music stops suddenly and doesn't mirror the beginning so and ruins the as a loopability of the piece. Still pretty good though.
I have a reason.
This should be at least 3 minutes of awesome! But you shorted it, so Im shorting you. Now think about what you've done and make it longer.
You're not my momma! ):
Someone has been playing Super Paper Mario
Sounds a lot like Super Paper Mario, but it's pretty good. Not the best.