Loved that episode...
too bad it wasn't something you made up. It was nicely done. Pretty dead-on actually. Let's see your own episode. ATHF for life.
Reviews for "ATHF: The Broodwich"
pixelz responds:
But then the voices and sound quality wouldn't be as good. I'm working on an original animation upcoming (lots more effort will be put into it, alot more) um I'm just into making these quick tests now. But thanks for the review!
Nice!
You have greatly improved upon from the time you joined the Sunday Comics and Toons Collab. Ahh, the good old days... Anyway, let's get to the review. You did a pretty good job on this, but there is room for improvement. The graphics, or characters need some working on. Shake could have been added more upon. What I mean is that you could have shaded him and added more details to him. For example, the straw on top of his head was just a stick. Try drawing out the straw and add those thick red and white lines so that it would look much more realistic and would even enhance the character's overall look. Another detail or improvement you could have added was making the characters, especially the characters that were talking, blink. It would have looked great and made the characters look more realistic. Unless, if in the real episode, they didn't blink, then I guess it was ok you left them without blinking. The sound, or in other words, the sound clip from the acutal episode was of good quality and there really wasn't any problem with it. The feature that was really good in your animation was the lip synching. You did a great job on making the lip syncing accurate and it looked really nice on the characters animation wise. Overall next time, work on the graphics or characters a little bit more (The background looked nice by the way), if chances permit try to make it a little bit longer and you'll be much better off. Very nice job on this and keep up the great work!
Summary Points: Average graphics, can be improved upon, Nice Style, Nice crystal clear sound, very great lip synching techniques.
pixelz responds:
LOL the characters were drawn as they are in the show, the scene features a less graphic intensivnessissity to it. Its more of a lip sync test, If your in need of practisiing lip syncing yourself I highly suggest using this clip because of the range of speed in the voices. Thanks for the review.
LOL
I love that scene!! I thought it was ripped but you made it your self!!
pixelz responds:
LOL yeah I altered the characters appearences except for shake, he just looks so cool in this scene...
Thanks for the review!
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Very nice art and animation, but I'm afraid originality is lacking. Nice job on the experient, it's apparent you have skill. Now what you can do for the next flash is make your own episode of ATHF.. that would be impressive.
pixelz responds:
Yeah its not suppost to be original or anything spectacular its just a test, but a polished test at that, as long as everyone thinks my lip syncing was good then woohoo! Thanks for the review!
mmkay
listen man, we all love athf, but i just wanna know why you think people wouldnt just watch the actual episode, i mean its not intresting enough to copy(at least in my opinion. i do think you did well making it, but try to be more orginal next time.
pixelz responds:
Ah, in response the show is basically talk, so I thought I could practise my lip syncing with a piece from the show. I get lip syncing more now.