hay, it's pretty okay. too short though
I liked it, but I didn't like it. the choice of stage size didn't make sense to me, and the other thing that didn't make sense to me was why one of the riders was offended by what the other rider said... do they belong to that kingdom or are they friends of it? I agree too it's too short... but I do like the crude animation because it works with the color choices and the whole sound design.
Nice job.
In this submission you have sucessfully managed to create a funny persona and entertain us with enough seriousness in the submission too. The graphics in this submission were great and the storyline it provided provided some great comedic laughs too. One of the better submissions out there for sure.
good
that was good wish it was longer though
Average
This flash made me chuckle, but it could have made me laugh with some better jokes. Sorry, but jokes based purely on stupidity got old a while ago.
Also, you should have added a big twist. A punchline if you will, something that just makes me go "woah, what the fuck!". Like maybe a landmine goes off even though their in the middle ages or something.
Work on the art as well, maybe that was what you were going for. But I, personally, like to watch flashes where the author puts a lot of effort into the art aspect.
Everything else was just average, really nothing better. I've yet to check out the other episodes in this series. Maybe they will be better, but the fate of this flash is sealed.
3/5 and 7/10
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I don't know what to think
I don't understand why almost everyone is given this 10, The voice acted sounds was kinda annoying, the voice acting was good though. the concept of an edibal castle is original and the animation and art was above average. However i didn't find it funny.