Reviews for Smoke - The City Menace

[FattyWhale]

K

^^Good Points^^
The movie displays a good moral, that smoking is bad, which I agree on. Anyway, I like how you had a lot going on in this movie aside from the main character, which was neat. Seems like a regular day when you do that. The animations were pretty cool, definitely the best part of this graphically.

^^Needs Improving^^
First thing I noticed was the short loop you had. It played the whole time which was annoying, and even worse, it was pretty low quality. Also, the storyline just seems to drag on too long. You need to get to the point much quicker. I'll admit I didn't watch the whole thing because I was pretty bored.

n00b-l0s3r responds:

Thank ye. Your criticism will be taken into much consideration. And I didn't know such simple animation would give this so much bonuses XD

It's OK if you didn't watch it all. At least you watched it :D

[gustre]

smoke

i didnt quite get the point of this movie and i almost didnt watch it till the end. it was just boring. what was it? a tragic story or just a telling off? graphics where ok but.... i dont think that throwing a cigarette to the floor will set the entire bank on fire plus its not allowed to smoke in such buildings... or the thing with the smoke in the mayors house... what ever... there surely are ppl who fall doze off on their couches while smoking but i think its their problem... whatever.. somehow i forgot my thoughts :S...

ps: im against smokers too, but that cartoon was just too flat

n00b-l0s3r responds:

Lol, k. Thank.