Reviews for A Love Story.

[Shianky]

not bad

You had a nice idea there I guess. Eventually for your girlfried or something. It was creative, but somehow the style of the drawing of the character reminded me on Salad Fingers and was a bit more scary then cute (I guess you tried to made it look as cute as possible). I dunno, maybe the face should be rounder and the mouth a little bigger, an the eyes shouldn be as black as they were. Just try to experiment with the face a little and it's gonna get better. But nice peace of work there anyway.

RhysMus responds:

Thanks man,
Haha salad fingers, i cant see the resemblance but oh well, I though it looked cute, maybe ill try a lil harder next time haha.
Thanks.

[sysrq868]

That's amazing.

Not very well drawn, but I guess that that's the "it" in this. The song fitted well, although I don't much like that kind of "musique" very much.

I thought all the way long that this was a screamer, but I guess that there's some honest flashes out there.

Tip: You have gray on the heart glow. Don't look nice. :-(

RhysMus responds:

Thanks anyways man.
This was a completely different thing to something that I would usually make and a whole different style of animation. I don't think theres gray on the heart glow, it's probably because it's in the black background and looks grey.
Thanks.